This is such a dark picture. It feels true to life, so I know you've used your own experiences to write it; I'm glad your search for escape had a different ending. The descriptions here are vivid and add to the sense of anger and futility. Emotions come across with clarity. You engage our empathy with your hopeful little family, with Annushka's innocence and the little touch of comfort that is Piff. I hate leaving them in limbo! Great writing.
This is so well written. I’m there with you at the meeting and have a feel for how dejected you were upon your request being denied. Thank you for keeping these stories/memories alive.
This is such a dark picture. It feels true to life, so I know you've used your own experiences to write it; I'm glad your search for escape had a different ending. The descriptions here are vivid and add to the sense of anger and futility. Emotions come across with clarity. You engage our empathy with your hopeful little family, with Annushka's innocence and the little touch of comfort that is Piff. I hate leaving them in limbo! Great writing.
Thank you, my soul writing buddy.
This is so well written. I’m there with you at the meeting and have a feel for how dejected you were upon your request being denied. Thank you for keeping these stories/memories alive.
Thank you so much
Thank you so much, Lorna. I appreciate you.